Saturday, June 26, 2021
Often, students and practitioners ask for me book recommendations on appellate advocacy. Like many, I am a fan of Bryan Garner’s works and of anything by Judge Ruggero J. Aldisert. Recently, Professors Daniel P. Selmi and Rebecca A. Delfino, colleagues of mine when I was teaching at Loyola Law School Los Angeles, published the Second Edition of Principles of Appellate Advocacy with Wolters Kluwer (Aspen). The book is aimed at law students, but its straightforward organization and direct examples will help students and newer practitioners alike. I will definitely be recommending Principles of Appellate Advocacy in the future.
Delfino explained she found the first edition of the book when she needed a legal writing and appellate advocacy text that would not “overwhelm students with a disparate mixture of rules, arcane procedural requirements, and multiple writing instructions.” She also: “didn’t want to use a dense case book, a workbook of exercises, or seminar materials full of platitudes or hacks geared to practitioners. Instead, I wanted something practical, concise, and accessible written by someone who knows the law student audience.” Delfino found Selmi’s first edition easily manageable for students, with instructions “laser-focused on appellate brief-writing.”
In the second edition, Selmi and Delfino, now a co-author, have retained the comfortable length and approachability of the book. The second edition is only 166 pages before the samples and problems. While full of excellent concrete examples, the text flows easily and invites students to stay engaged with clear and direct writing. Just like a good brief, the book has a very helpful Table of Contents and keeps the focus on explaining why each proposed writing technique matters.
Delfino explained the main changes to the second edition came from student and colleague feedback. Selmi and Delfino added more information on standards of review, appealable error, and preservation of issues for appeal. They also included new exercises to stress the “rules for writing discussed in the text and [provide] practice revision and editing techniques.” Finally, they added a helpful video on oral argument and a sample syllabus.
I especially liked Chapter 10, “Basic Writing and Other Mechanics.” As the authors aptly explain, good writing “is not a matter of ‘style’” but of following key principles. Principles of Appellate Advocacy provides ten areas of focus for the best legal writing, such as manageable sentence and paragraph length and effective topic sentences. The book also has great examples, some in understandable diagram form, of the dreaded passive voice and nominalizations my students use sometimes.
As the authors note in the Introduction, “Appellate brief writing is a time-intensive exercise” and a “course in appellate advocacy undoubtedly will take more of students’ time than they estimate.” But the new edition of Principles of Appellate Advocacy will help students and newer practitioners get to winning briefs more quickly and easily.